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Seven Things I Have Learned From My Creative Writing Group

Happy New Year!

If you have been following my blog for a while, you are aware I lead a senior creative writing group in Winter Garden, Florida – The Ink & Quill Writer’s Group. It’s been the best thing I have done for my writing. I know people say that one learns more from teaching something than by just doing something. I can testify to that. I intended from the start to just lead this group rather than to teach, but I saw a need with the folks that made up the group. I am one who collects articles about all things writing, so I just started bringing those articles to the group and summarizing them. That lead to more of a short teaching time followed by each member reading what they had written from the prompts I had given them the time before. What a wonderful experience it has been! Here are some of the things I have learned from this group:

  1. Each writer comes to the group with their own background, their own voice in how they write, and their own skill set. It seems to be just as important to know these things as it is to be aware of why they are coming to the group. I have been awed by those that could write a rap, poems, song lyrics, science fiction, homey poetic stories – the list goes on and on. No one writes the same, and everyone has some sort of story they can tell.
  2. I have learned that some people are better storytellers than writers and that is OK. You can hone their writing skills, but it is harder to teach someone to tell a story, than the mechanics of writing a story.
  3. Challenging the members to try something different is … well … a challenge! Some step tentatively into a different genre or type of writing, others avoid it, and a few just dive in and try to embrace the challenge. I give them at least three different prompts, and they can do all of them or just one. Often I see them doing the one that is the most comfortable for them, but sometimes they will stretch themselves and try something that’s out of their comfort zone. Many times that turns out to be something they are quite proud of because they had to work hard to get it right.
  4. If you are encouraging to each writer, each writer encourages the others. I revel in each person’s improvements in writing. Sometimes it takes months to see the progress, but when it happens, the whole group sees it and praise the writer for those improvements.
  5. Knowing that I need to produce something for the writing group twice a month, keeps me writing! Collectively the Group expects you to write – therefore you have to write! It keeps you accountable to persist in putting those words on the paper. It spurs you on, keeps the juices flowing, and makes you more creative.
  6. It has made me a better writer. Not only have I written more since forming the group, but I have learned so much from others that it has improved my writing.
  7. Having fun when you write is what makes writing so enjoyable. The group experience brings out the fun involved in writing and being creative. So many times our discussions during the meetings have gone off topic, but often that has been some of our more memorable meetings. What these discussions turn out to be is exploring being creative, finding our voice, and following our passion. We become being better writers because of this.

I’d love to hear what your experience has been being part of a writing group. Feel free to comment.

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The Christmas Elf

I’d like to share with you a Christmas story. I hope you enjoy it. Please share if you wish just make sure to credit me!

The Christmas Elf

By Marie Staight

Lady Delphine Adelle Huffington struggled to wrap the Christmas wrapping paper around the wind-up toy. The cute little ducky wind-up toy looked adorable with its yellow rain cap, green galoshes, and red raincoat. When one wound up its key, its stubby whitetail would swish back and forth, and it would waddle forward along the floor. It was the perfect gift for her favorite nephew Rupert Huffington the third. Rupert was two and a half years old, and his favorite activity was to trundle his way down to the nearest pond with his nanny and watch the ducks. Of late he had been mesmerized by a mother duck and her six ducklings, who swam about the pond and then would march out onto the land and back to her nest deep in the hedges on the South side of the pond. 

“Oh!” Puffed Lady Delphine, “I broke my nail!”  What a disaster, she thought. She was no good at this. How would she get the presents wrapped at this rate? She rang the bell sitting next to her on the desk. With the speed of lightning, her maid-in-waiting, Priscilla, appeared at her side.

“Yes, My Lady.  May I help you?” a whispery voice said next to her elbow.

Lady Delphine jumped, not that she should have been surprised, because Pricilla was always appearing as if out of the woodwork; it just never failed to startle her. “Yes, Pricilla, can you help me wrap these presents?” She indicated the duck and the large toy in a box.

A shadow of a smile crossed Pricilla’s face. She seemed to be struggling not to burst into laughter. “Yes, My Lady.” She said as she turned her head to the side to hide her amusement of the sight of proper Lady Delphine, her fingers stuck to the paper with sticky tape and a string of hair straying from her perfect hairstyle down onto her forehead. Pricilla deftly unwrapped the tape from Lady Delphine’s long fingers and spread out the wrapping paper again. “Ah,” she said, “this seems to be the problem. We need a bigger piece of paper to cover this toy properly.”

Pricilla proceeded to cut a bigger piece and expertly wrap the toy like a bundle. She then tied a jolly red ribbon around the top to hold the paper together. Seeing that Lady Delphine was disappointed she had not helped, Pricilla asked, “What do you think Lady Delphine? Does it need some tape right here? And here?” Pricilla asked, pointing to where the ribbon choked the top of the paper. Lady Delphine managed to stick on a couple of pieces of tape to hold the ribbon in place. Then Pricilla fluffed out the top, so it looked quite lovely.

“Oh, excellent! We did a great job of wrapping. I do hope Rupert will be happy with this gift.”

“My Lady, if you will allow me to say, the way that boy fancies you, I think he would love anything you gave him. But this …” Pricilla floated her hand above the present as if showing off an expensive item in a game show showcase. “Why, he will be jumping up and down to open this!”

Lady Delphine had to smile at Pricilla’s dramatic presentation, but she did have to agree that little Rupert would be very pleased with this Christmas gift, perhaps even more so than the toy that was in the big box.   

Ding, Ding, Dong, rang the front doorbell. “I’ll answer that My Lady,” Pricilla said, and silently strode out of the room. Lady Delphine, not for the first time, wondered how the little maid did that – being so light on her feet.

Lady Delphine heard some loud voices and wondered who could be at the door. Just then a little person burst into the drawing room with Pricilla bustling behind him. “I’m sorry My Lady; he pushed by me. He wants to speak to you.”

Lady Delphine was intrigued by the mysterious dwarf’s small stature, pointed long white beard and amazing deep brown eyes that seem to twinkle at her. “That’s alright, Pricilla,” she said. “I’m sure this young man and I can talk for a few minutes.” She looked into those gorgeous brown eyes and stammered. “P … Please sit down, sir.”

The dwarf hopped up onto the nearest chair and sat with his legs out straight on the cushion because he was too short to have his feet on the floor. He took off his red hat and said, “I’m sorry to bother you today My Lady, but it has come to my attention that there is a problem in the village that only you can solve.”

“Really?”

“Yes, My Lady. You see, there dwells within the village a little boy named Davey Marks. He is the son of the late baker, Steven Marks. Did you know him?”

“Why of course I did!” Lady Delphine sighed, “I loved his sourdough bread. I haven’t had a good piece of sourdough toast since he died.” 

“Ah,” said the little man. “Yes, well, to get to the point. For weeks Little Davey has been visiting the toy shop and expressed to the toymaker that he wanted a certain toy for Christmas. His Mother had been saving for it, but …”

“She doesn’t have enough money for it?” Lady Delphine interrupted. “I’ll be happy to contribute the money to make the little tyke happy.” She reached for her purse.

The dwarf stopped her and said, “No My lady, that is not the problem.” He cleared his throat, and his little face grew red. “It’s just that… well …” He hesitated, his lips twisting as if trying to form a word but they wouldn’t cooperate.

Lady Delphine asked, “The problem is …?” She waited, looking expectantly at the embarrassed little man. “Please, you can speak candidly with me.”

Then it burst from his mouth like water from a hole in a dam. “My lady, the toymaker tells us that you have purchased the very toy that little Davey has longed for, and his mother has so diligently saved for.” The dwarf’s face twisted up as if waiting for blows upon his little bald head. He wrung his hat as he waited.

Lady Delphine sat back in her chair and looked at the dwarf. She started to say something, then stopped and bit her lip – a bad habit she had since she was a child. The dwarf waited, his face relaxing a bit as he was aware she was thinking.

Finally, she said, “I assume you are speaking of the wind-up toy duck, sir?”

The dwarf furled his brows and said, “No, My Lady. I am speaking of the little red bicycle. It was purchased a few days ago by you along with the wind-up duck.”

Lady Delphine took a big breath and expelled it out in a huff. She smiled. “Mister …?”

“They call me Clarence, My Lady.”

“Well Clarence, I bought two presents for my favorite nephew.” She said with a big smile crossing her face as she sat up straight again. “One was very expensive, and the other was not. I bought the expensive one – not because I thought little Rupert would like it, but because I wanted to impress on his parents at how generous I am.” She hesitated, then continued, “But today I realized the less expensive present would be the one little Rupert would cherish much more than the expensive one, therefore if you would be so kind to return that present to the toymaker …”

The dwarf looked at her quizzically, “Yes, and … which toy would that be My Lady?”

“Why of course the red bicycle, Clarence.” She waved her hand indicating the big box by the table. “I do think Rupert is too young to enjoy that bicycle yet and so I will only give him the ducky toy.”

“Why thank you My Lady!” cried Clarence.

“And Clarence, see to it that the bicycle stays on my account. It will be my gift to the child of the baker who made the bread I enjoyed all those years.”

“Yes, My Lady.”

As the dwarf turned to leave, Lady Delphine stopped him by asking, “Clarence, I don’t believe I have seen you around the village before.”

“No My Lady, I am new here.” He turned and then said to her with his eyes twinkling brightly, “I was sent here from the head office to see that the children of this village had their wishes come true because they have been such good children all year.”

Now it was Lady Delphine’s turn to look quizzically. “The head office? Of what?’

“Why the North Pole, My Lady.” He said. “I’m sure you know my boss, Santa Claus?

Lady Delphine’s eyes fluttered, and she fell back against the chair in which she sat. Her eyes closed and when she opened them again Clarence was gone and so was the big box with the red bicycle in it.

Pricilla appeared at the door. “My Lady, Dinner is ready.

“Thank you, Pricilla.” Lady Delphine said. “Um, Pricilla, I take it that Clarence left with the bicycle?”

Pricilla wrung her hands, “My Lady? Clarence? A bicycle?” Pricilla’s face was blank as if she didn’t know about whom Lady Delphine was speaking.

Lady Delphine closed her eyes, opened them again, and looked to make sure the big box with the bicycle was not there. Then she smiled at Pricilla and said, “Never mind, I must have been dreaming…”

On Christmas Day, Rupert opened the festive package wrapped gaily with a red ribbon from his favorite Auntie. He was thrilled and played with the wind-up toy all day.

 His mother reported to the Lady Delphine weeks later that this modest toy was little Rupert’s favorite of all the expensive toys he had received that day.

On that very same day she had spoken to Rupert’s mother, Lady Delphine received the bill from the Toy Shop. She was not surprised to see the bill included the price of a red bicycle.

The End

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La-Dee-Dah Days

Alright, I confess, the Holidays are upon is and and I am knee deep in the Holiday Spirit – so much so that writing has taken a back seat for a while. Oh dear, did I just hear a collective gasp? That’s like a cardinal sin with writer’s, right? You are expected to write every day. Well, it’s not that I have stopped writing – it’s just that I am not writing as much or as frequently as usual. Perhaps it is a backlash from the NaNoWriMo fever of last month …

Real life sort of gets in the way sometimes and you just have to adjust your priorities. That’s one of the perks in writing in retirement – you can give yourself permission to take a break, or readjust your writing time. You are your own boss, and don’t have to bow to a calendar or time clock. You can take a breath and regroup when it’s needed.

So I have decided to take some La-Dee-Dah days until the rush of the Holidays are over. I’ll see you here Next Year! In the meantime, here’s a little ditty I made up for the roofing company.

Up On Marie’s Rooftop Christmas Song

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Up on the rooftop, Irma blows

Down to the ground the shingles flow

Off break the branches from the trees

A day and a half, no electricity.

 

Chorus:  Oh, ho, ho!

What do you know?

Oh, ho, ho!

Who wouldn’t show?

Up on the rooftop,

Tap, Tap, Tap!

Down go new shingles,

With good insurance.

 

First the adjuster with check in hand

Then the contractor by satellite

Days of pounding over my head

Up before there is even light.

Chorus

 

Why not fix that saggy ceiling?

Falling down in my garage.

What about these soffit vents?

And that new attic vent?

Chorus

 

Days and days of workers here,

Pounding, pounding in my ear

Christmas came early on my roof,

Now dear Santa can come on hoof.

Chorus

 

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to Y’all!

Marie

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Feeling Like a WINNER After NaNoWriMo

Twenty-two thousand, four hundred and ninety-three words was all I could muster during NaNoWriMo. But to put it another way, I had a twenty-two thousand, four hundred and ninety-three word draft of a story. I have a head start on a story that I can finish during the next few months. That’s the beauty of NaNoWriMo.

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As always with NaNo, I learned new things about writing. I decided to use a different format for the story – a diary format. Something I had never tried this before this. It had helped that I had been reading some books written in this format before November. I learned two important things about this format: 1. What I found was I had to have an old calendar right beside me so I could keep track of the correct dates: and 2. I needed to make sure I had the weather correct for those dates!

I know the challenge is to finish a fifty thousand word draft, but this year, because of all the challenges in my life, I could not devote the time I needed to do the fifty thousand words. Instead, I just plugged along writing in the time I was able to sit down at the computer. It forced me to write daily, no matter how little I wrote and it proved to me that I could produce a story if I wrote consistently. So, in my mind, I am a Winner.

True I have no certificate or badge, but I still came out a Winner. Those of you that fret because you did not make the goal – don’t get upset. Look at the other side of the challenge. Good for you! You are way ahead of those that did nothing! There is always next year to try and make the goal. In the meantime, take the words you have already written and shape them into a decent draft.

How about you? Did you make the fifty thousand word goal? What new things did you learn about writing as you took part in this challenge? Will you participate in NaNoWriMo again? Share with me by commenting below.

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NaNoWriMo Final Update

As much as it pains me to say –  with four days to go in November, there is no way I am going to meet my goal of 30,000 words for NaNoWriMo this year. But the good news is, I am happy! I have a story and characters that I like. I am about a third of the way through and I feel like I know where the  story is going. So even though I won’t get a WINNER certificate this year  – I still feel like a winner. There will be plenty of time to work on the rest of the story after Christmas. The rest of the good news is that I still have my sanity and that is a good thing!

So how about the rest of you doing NaNoWriMo this year? How did it go for you? I would love to hear from you.

Marie